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- Hello there,
- I am Braeden, I am an avid software engineer, actively
- pursuing a Diploma in Computer System Technologies at BCIT. I am adaptable and driven with a strong work ethic;
- possessing the ability to thrive in both a team-based or individualy motivated setting.
+ As a software engineer, I am passionate about developing back-end systems and data-driven applications.
+ Currently pursuing a Diploma in Computer Systems Technology at
+ BCIT, I continuously expand my skills
+ through hands-on projects and real-world applications, driven by curiosity and a love for problem-solving.
- I am eager to expand my knowledge in Software Engineering, IT, System Administration and related fields.
- Approaching more than 5 years of continuous learning and programming, I have learned many valuable languages and
- frameworks such as C, Go, Node.js, and Python 3+. However, there is always more to learn and experience that I
- will accomplish by quickly adapting to a new setting.
+ Experience building back-end systems, APIs, and full-stack applications has strengthened my foundation
+ in languages such as C, Go, Java, JavaScript, and Python, as well as technologies like Docker, MongoDB,
+ and SQL. Working on collaborative BCIT projects and open-source contributions has further developed my
+ skills in agile workflows, oral and written communication, and delivering solutions that solve real-world p
+ roblems, all while exploring new frameworks and methodologies
About me