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           <p class="eyebrow">About</p>
           <h2 id="about-title">A focused software studio, built around useful products.</h2>
           <p>
-            Cedarline Digital is the operating home for software products, support resources, policies, and selected development work from British Columbia.
+            Cedarline Digital is an independent software business for building, supporting, and maintaining practical digital products from British Columbia.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div class="about-grid">
@@ -160,9 +160,9 @@
       <section class="section" id="work" aria-labelledby="work-title">
         <div class="section-heading">
           <p class="eyebrow">Work</p>
-          <h2 id="work-title">What Cedarline Digital is for.</h2>
+          <h2 id="work-title">Software built with a clear purpose.</h2>
           <p>
-            The public site should feel like a calm front desk for a real software business: clear enough for customers, restrained enough for policies and support, and flexible enough for future products.
+            The work spans independent products, web applications, business systems, support resources, and selected client projects where the scope and long-term value are clear.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div class="card-grid work-list">
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@
               <p class="service-type">Resources</p>
             </div>
             <h3>Support and policies</h3>
-            <p>A dependable place for customer support, privacy policies, terms, and release information.</p>
+            <p>Customer support, privacy policies, terms, and release information for active Cedarline Digital projects.</p>
           </article>
           <article class="service-card">
             <div>
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@
           <p class="eyebrow">Principles</p>
           <h2 id="brand-title">Professional does not have to feel sterile.</h2>
           <p>
-            The tone is quiet, capable, and grounded: polished enough to earn trust, but direct enough to avoid inflated claims.
+            Cedarline Digital values steady execution, clear communication, and software that can be understood, supported, and improved after it ships.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div class="principle-list">