update about me + awards

about.html

@@ -111,16 +111,17 @@
     <section class="about" id="about">
       <h3 class="title">About me</h3>
       <p class="text">
-        Hello there,
+        As a software engineer, I am passionate about developing back-end systems and data-driven applications. 
-        I am Braeden, I am an avid software engineer, actively
+        Currently pursuing a Diploma in Computer Systems Technology at 
-        pursuing a Diploma in Computer System Technologies at <abbr title="British Columbia Institute of Technology">BCIT</abbr>. I am adaptable and driven with a strong work ethic; 
+        <abbr title="British Columbia Institute of Technology">BCIT</abbr>, I continuously expand my skills 
-        possessing the ability to thrive in both a team-based or individualy motivated setting.
+        through hands-on projects and real-world applications, driven by curiosity and a love for problem-solving.        
       </p>
       <p class="text">
-        I am eager to expand my knowledge in Software Engineering, IT, System Administration and related fields.
+        Experience building back-end systems, APIs, and full-stack applications has strengthened my foundation 
-        Approaching more than 5 years of continuous learning and programming, I have learned many valuable languages and 
+        in languages such as C, Go, Java, JavaScript, and Python, as well as technologies like Docker, MongoDB, 
-        frameworks such as C, Go, Node.js, and Python 3+. However, there is always more to learn and experience that I 
+        and SQL. Working on collaborative BCIT projects and open-source contributions has further developed my 
-        will accomplish by quickly adapting to a new setting.
+        skills in agile workflows, oral and written communication, and delivering solutions that solve real-world p
+        roblems, all while exploring new frameworks and methodologies
       </p>
     </section>
 
@@ -132,15 +133,17 @@
         <dd class="text">
           Issued by
           <abbr title="Sullivan Heights Secondary School">SHSS</abbr>
-        — Recognition award
+          — Award recognizing the hard work on my schedule-generating software, generating student schedules 
-          for capstone project.
+            and master timetables for a high school environment
         </dd>
 
         <dt class="text"><b>Master Digital Crafter</b></dt>
         <dd class="text">
           Issued by
           <abbr title="Sullivan Heights Secondary School">SHSS</abbr>
-        — Exceeding expectationg in Software Engineering 11/12</dd>
+          — Award issued by the former Head IT Admin/Teacher at Sullivan Heights Secondary for excelling in 
+            Web Development 10, and Software Engineering 11/12
+        </dd>
       </dl>
     </section>